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Her Own Insanity
Contributed by
night_child
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Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In the very depths of her own abyss
She calls to you
Crying to be saved
The worlds cold heart turned its back against her
And now she has nothing
A dense fog creeps around her
As she walks down a lonely road
Images of death and sorrow fill her shadowed mind
Look into her soul
Look at her suffering
Tormented, with no one to blame but herself
Her own insanity conjoured by her troubled head
It will never stop
With a heavy heart
She walks on
Eyes worn from crying
The darkness closes in on her
Closes
Closes
It will never stop.....
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2003-09-20 20:05:00]
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Re: Her Own Insanity
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by midian on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 12:29:41 PM AEST
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all i can say is what a lovely write
i dont really know what you wrote this about
but i have a friend who i can compare this almost exactly too..
a beautifal write
~x~ Carly ~x~ |
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Re: Her Own Insanity
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:57:39 AM AEST
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| oh wow........perfection....yes....closes..... |
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Re: Her Own Insanity
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 03:16:05 PM AEST
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This really touched me, as it hit home.. a wonderful poem..
x_x_x |
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Re: Her Own Insanity
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by Merry on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 08:27:22 PM AEST
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gee this could be about me - ---that's probably not a good thing is it?
very nice write - painted a very graphic picture in my mind
merry |
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Re: Her Own Insanity
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by Rain on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 05:49:35 PM AEST
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nicely written.. i like this.
~sara~ |
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Re: Her Own Insanity
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by Rachel on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 06:21:30 PM AEST
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| well written. I can relate. |
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