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In the end there still is smoke
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
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Walking alone through this deserted plain
Searching for someone who feels the same
Deep down inside theres no one to name
I stand alone and only I'm to blame
A victim of lonliness
Suffering so intense
Drowning in ignorance
How my life reflects
Just one of the defects
Stranded amongst rejects
Looking for reverance
Its all irrelevent
My finding is no hope
Just an excape goat
Strung out on some dope
Hanging from a rope
Dangling on words wrote
From some one I don't know
So now where should I go
Cause I am still alone
Walking this plain for so long
My destination is so wrong
Why do I keep walking along
Now I will stop for a bong
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2003-09-20 16:25:00]
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Re: In the end there still is smoke
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:36:15 PM AEST
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Amazing I feel the same way. Weed is known for its anti-depressant qualities. Great well written poem.
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Re: In the end there still is smoke
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 05:24:18 PM AEST
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| thank you ...finally someone!!!! weed saved my life and my marriage....... |
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Re: In the end there still is smoke
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 05:33:10 PM AEST
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Hmmm interesting poem and comments....
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Re: In the end there still is smoke
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by painted_echos on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 06:14:53 PM AEST
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yes, i too know how you feel. weed kept me from imploding while my ex and i lived in separate rooms but same house.
then something changed and i ended up in the hospital for severe clinical depression.
weed did not cause it, not even close; however, weed is a depressant (not anti- depressant), and weed did help exaserbate the depression. well...i'll still do it now and then, you know! just be careful, because what you think may be your saving grace is just helping to dig you down. (hmm...i've been awfully preachy today. excuse me). |
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Re: In the end there still is smoke
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by emystar on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:56:34 PM AEST
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I can relate. I excercise my Indian rights as a native american.
I use it for pain and many other reasons besides the fact that I luv the s*it out of it!
Good work here.
My Drs. know I do it as I'm honest with them.
Pass the bong 2 me , it's my turn.
PRAYER, PEACE, JOY, SMOKE,
emy |
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