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My Life
Contributed by
ravi
on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 12:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I live my life,
black as hell,
strong as death,
sweet as love,
pious as humanity,
bloodsucking as war,
fragile as hope,
bitter as defeat,
intoxicated as success,
powerful as destiny,
ugly as revenge,
tempting as sex,
cruel as man.
I will still go on living it,
till death tears me out of it.
Copyright ©
ravi
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2003-09-20 12:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by hazelnut on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 12:34:59 PM AEST (User
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very vivid portrayal. i like your style |
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Re: My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Night_Child on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 01:38:58 PM AEST (User
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I like your style too.....great poem I hope you write more. |
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