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I REMEMBERED YOU
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I remembered
I remembered
Your face cast shadows across her mind
I remembered
I remembered
Out with her sanity evil's all you'll find
I remembered
I remembered
Trace her past left so far behind
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
Persecution through his fear
Desecrate her innocence
His hands committed evil
Her body does his penance.
I remembered
I remembered
A bargain for the silence
I remembered
I remembered
You left her world off balance
I remembered
I remembered
Broken mind of circumstance
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
Purged her willful independence
Crushed her tiny soul
Choked the life's breath out of her
Raped her vanity leaving her unwhole
I remembered
I remembered
Your face casts shadows across her mind
I remembered
I remembered
Out with her sanity evil's all you'll find
I remembered
I remembered
Trace her past left so far behind
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
TRANSPARENT EYES
BARGAINED LIVES
BROKEN TIES
UNFORGIVEN LIES
SSSSSSHHHHHH
HELD HER BREATH
AND
DIED
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
A bargain for her silence
Leaving her world off balance
Cast the shadows form her mind
Seeking truth only evil to find
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
I remembered you
I remembered you
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-09-20 11:05:00]
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Re: I REMEMBERED YOU
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by M on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 11:08:14 AM AEST
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I really have no words for this poem. It is so angry and full of emotion. I especially like the Transparant eyes part. Very well written.
Love and hope,
EmilyxXx |
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Re: I REMEMBERED YOU
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 11:42:25 AM AEST
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| this is absolutely fantastic...i love it so much...has to be one of the best things i have read...so, so good... |
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Re: I REMEMBERED YOU
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:33:53 PM AEST
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| Excellent. |
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Re: I REMEMBERED YOU
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 06:12:23 PM AEST
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so powerfully written...much emotion
very good write
Shari |
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Re: I REMEMBERED YOU
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:38:27 PM AEST
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| WOW!! *gob smacked* Excellent! |
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Re: I REMEMBERED YOU
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 05:34:37 AM AEST
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| I feel my mind is drifting in the waves of a sea of tears..venkat |
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Re: I REMEMBERED YOU
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 05:39:55 AM AEST
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..sorry..this is an angry poem..so I have to say my mind is drifting in the waves of emotional music
venkat |
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