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The world is a Beautiful place if...
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
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The world is a beautiful place
To live
If
You don’t mind not being safe after dark
Not being able to walk alone
If you’re female
If you don’t mind a few home invasions and a couple murders here and there.
The world is a beautiful place
To live
If
You don’t mind sending your child to a under funded,
over crowed school
Where gangs and drug dealers run the school.
And a mass shooter may enter at any time and
kill your precious angel
The world is a beautiful place to live
If
You don’t mind the soaring fuel prices
The threat against peace
and safety
The wide spread propaganda
The world is a beautiful place if you
Don’t mind
The wars, anger, murder, and violence
In the media
Which overshadows the man the plucked a
5-year-old girl
And her teddy from the burning fire
Or the teens that choose NOT to speed down the hill.
And through this all
God just stares down and laughs at us.
Copyright ©
lil_angel
... [
2003-09-20 03:05:00]
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Re: The world is a Beautiful place if...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 03:09:00 AM AEST
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| Awesome and true... So many people are blind and can't see how our society is messed up. Great poem! |
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Re: The world is a Beautiful place if...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 03:20:10 AM AEST
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| you vent 'beautifully'! i like this. painted_echos |
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Re: The world is a Beautiful place if...
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by kalika_vidya on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:30:16 AM AEST
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| So much truth lies in this poem..Great write..K |
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Re: The world is a Beautiful place if...
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 09:00:50 AM AEST
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| I like the way you gave IF a full line to itself, the passion in this poem is cool 2 |
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Re: The world is a Beautiful place if...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 11:43:25 AM AEST
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Pessimistic but, sadly, true. Oh well. The world sucks. People suck. Whatcha gonna do? Nice write that reminds me why I'm so bitter lately. Thanks, I just might have forgotten otherwise.
~ Dee |
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Re: The world is a Beautiful place if...
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 09:29:15 PM AEST
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This is such a true write.
The world in which we live, should be better.
*S* Cynthia |
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