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Fear From Her Eyes
Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Will fear last forever
in a heart I`ll try to mend.
Might I warm your hands
that hold so tightly, to bitter
winds of the past.
Will you ever be just mine,
could you put the world away.
I swear you are safe here,
with the silence we will keep.
Stand behind me,
not in the shadow,
close I might feel your breath,
and know you are of me..........Crow
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2003-09-19 06:05:00]
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Re: Fear From Her Eyes
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 06:52:51 AM AEST
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| How you warm my heart and open my soul to dance *sighs* Beauty within..yeah you better believe it! ;) |
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Re: Fear From Her Eyes
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 08:35:53 AM AEST
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the perfect poem to start this day great write Crow
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Re: Fear From Her Eyes
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 11:26:16 AM AEST
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wow this is so breathtaking...good work
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Re: Fear From Her Eyes
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by jaeann on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 11:39:37 AM AEST
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| could you put the world away........if only to be asked that.......this is great work!!!! |
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Re: Fear From Her Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 11:42:25 AM AEST
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Ahhhhhh refreshing!!! Love your words!!!
angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Fear From Her Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 10:28:34 PM AEST
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your poem is so beautifully written (this i expected!). but you write from your soul, so when i read your words, i feel them. have you found her, your soul mate? the one that when you look into her eyes, you see the gateway to her soul, and within her, you know all that you are and ever were, as her breath becomes your own. (i hope you don't mind)
your poem tells of your heart. she is to be envied. painted_echos |
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Re: Fear From Her Eyes
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 08:42:35 AM AEST
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Might I warm your hands
that hold so tightly, to bitter
winds of the past.
Those bitter winds will blow away...and sweet, fresh ones will replace it....
Loved this...
Jenni |
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