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Silver Stars Purple Skies
Contributed by
Chicken
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Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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Silver stars consume the purple skies,
As toward them in awe we cast our eyes.
Our shock is silent, our words unspoken,
We cry out loudly, but the quiet remains unbroken.
Slaves we are to the heavens above,
Never knowing what we truly dream of.
And so we die, unaware of pain,
That’s the method by which we live this game.
Copyright ©
Chicken
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2003-09-19 05:05:00]
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Re: Silver Stars Purple Skies
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by Aika on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:55:14 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem.. :-) aika
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Re: Silver Stars Purple Skies
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 08:05:08 PM AEST
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I think this is great very descriptive and well thought out although it could be a lot better if it was longer. Once again it was good!
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Re: Silver Stars Purple Skies
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 03:03:26 PM AEST
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| all your poems are good |
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