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I Left You Where I Found You
Contributed by
S_K_Williamson
on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I left you where I found you
tangeled in that massive bed
Lay here ...rest...wait for me
do you know what's in my head
I left you where I found you
I can't lay with you...all this day
Your touch just drives me crazy
I must go...I must... be on my way
I left you where I found you
oh...just one more kiss.....yes, right there
Your heat ...it leaves me breathless
it's... almost...more than I can bear
I left you where I found you
oh....let's don't stop...until we're through
I feel you so deep inside me
I can't breathe ... with all you do
I left you where I found you
your breath... electric on my skin
whisper your words of passion
as all of your heat's applied ...within
I left you where I found you
it's where I wish you to remain
We can love each other... endlessly
never the need for false refrain
I left you where I found you
wrapped up warm in our delight
'Till I lie back...here...to find you
in my dreams...most every night
Copyright ©
S_K_Williamson
... [
2003-09-18 15:05:00]
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Re: I Left You Where I Found You
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 04:47:59 PM AEST
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| this is really good.....i love the repetition....it fits.... |
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Re: I Left You Where I Found You
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 07:08:40 PM AEST
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| This is excellent! Lots of warm feelings and I love the ending...didnt see it coming :) |
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Re: I Left You Where I Found You
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by venkat on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 04:01:00 AM AEST
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| very very beautiful. venkat |
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Re: I Left You Where I Found You
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 03:58:11 AM AEST
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| This is so dreamy and beautiful...makes me want to be in love myself :) |
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