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Untitled
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
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Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Ring around the rosey
We all fall down
Time stands still
Til' we all hit the ground
Love letters and wedding rings
Doves fly above the heavenly sky
In harmony the world sings
When the rain falls we'll all cry
Goodnight, sweet dreams
See you tomorrow
When we all lost hope
We sat in sorrow
The days go on
And the sun will soon shine
And once again
It will make a warm feeling in this
heart of mine.
Copyright ©
youngpoet1989
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2003-09-18 12:45:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 02:05:32 PM AEST
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i liked this...good write...
percursors... |
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Re: Untitled
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 12:07:32 AM AEST
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This was good I know what its like to be down and depressed I hope you can smile again soon... Best of lu*****
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