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Dedicated
Contributed by
EmSal
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Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
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That day back in 2000 when I was dead,
Those last few words that my boyfriend said,
Made me pick up that already bloodied knife,
But this time it was going to take my life.
Everyone else had hurt me so they could stop me,
But you who I hardly knew could see,
Even just a little of the pain that I was going through,
So you took that knife so that I couldn't do what I wanted to.
You let me talk and you let me cry,
You were the first to ask me why.
A hug from you is what I pleaded,
You held me and gave me what I needed.
I was bonded to you from that day,
I appriciate what you did more than I can say.
Even though you are too far away for me to hold,
My love for you will never go cold.
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2003-09-18 12:05:00]
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Re: Dedicated
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:43:19 PM AEST
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Omg... this brought tears to my eyes. You're so lucky to have someone that would just hold you and let you cry. This is so touching. Absolutely beautiful.
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Re: Dedicated
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 01:10:48 AM AEST
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I COULD SAY THAT HE UNDERSTANDS YOU. I THINK THAT HE KNOWS YOU THANK HIM FOR EVERYTHING. I COULD SAY THAT I HEARD THAT YOU'RE SAYING THANK YOU FOR BEING THERE WHEN I NEED YOU WHEN NO ONE ELSE WAS THERE.
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