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Still
Contributed by
avarice_riot
on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Don't make a sound.
This moment is so perfect -
This absence of turbulence
of sound and of speaking
So frail that even a hint
of a whisper would
shatter it.
Oceans may drown the earth
The soil might choke the plants
But I'm still encased
In this beautiful, beautiful
moment.
And in this split second of silence
There is solitary bliss
Born of windless calmness.
And in this moment
Anything is possible....
Copyright ©
avarice_riot
... [
2003-09-18 06:05:00]
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Re: Still
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 06:42:24 AM AEST
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| you captured me in your moment and left me with a sense of calm, and a ray of hope that anything is possible. this is wonderful. thank you painted_echos |
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Re: Still
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 09:56:45 AM AEST
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| WOW..Can I just borrow that moment..Just for a lil bit?? lol..seriously...this is so tranquil. |
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Re: Still
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 02:05:02 AM AEST
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| Awesome simply awesome. I'm speechless. Amazing poem! |
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Re: Still
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 09:08:33 PM AEST
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Tranquil...thats the word...I have so little peace in my life, thank you for sharing this write and it's perfect moment in time. I remember how peace feels now.
Very well done Larry |
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Re: Still
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by Ronald on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:46:27 AM AEST
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| Everything about this poem is so awesome. You've used your gift of poetry well. |
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