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From The Lonely Heart
Contributed by
Kiz
on
Friday, 16th August 2002 @ 06:37:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Inside I’m screaming outside there’s no feeling!
I have pressure from things you’d never dream of, my parents will help me but all they can do is offer their love!
My heart races every time I see him, everything apart from the light around him is dim.
People are so involved in themselves; all their problems are plonked onto shelves.
My life is racing so quickly by, there’s nothing I can do so I sit back and watch it fly!
My heart has been broken a thousand times; if it should happen again it would stop my rhymes!
There’s a part of me that’s missing every time I look in the mirror, what part it is I’ll never figure!
My family tell me I’m so beautiful, if this is true why isn’t it believable?
I feel so lonely in my busy little life, why isn’t there anyone to share my strife?
All my life I dreamed of someone special, a friend, a shoulder to cry on, someone to lean on
It seems this was all a con!
Copyright ©
Kiz
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2002-08-16 06:37:34]
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Re: From The Lonely Heart
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th August 2002 @ 07:52:20 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, tho it's sad..but have PATIENCE, Kiz... all will work itself out..you'll see..
Jenni |
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Re: From The Lonely Heart
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by Chrissylee on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 06:12:52 PM AEST
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i feel your pain in your words of your ryhme i really do you are huritng both inside and out... great write but i hope you find happiness and soon.
peace, love and happy poetry |
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Re: From The Lonely Heart
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by norticus on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:10:35 AM AEST
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| I don't know if you planned this but this could be a really cool female Eminem song. I expected to read this and fall asleep because of the sleeper title, but I was surprised. Good poem good night. 4 on the Nortiscale. |
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