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+ Tainted Child +
Contributed by
Chanti
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Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Depression's hands hold my head under,
in an ocean of bitter tears,
i grasp for a second chance,
reaching for a paradise of mirth that i have never known.
Yet, I only catch a feeling of emptiness.
Midnight's dark blanket wraps tight around me,
choking me, killing me,
light only a glance away,
and yet i cannot see it.
Turned away from those who love me,
stabbing a dagger into each back,
cruel and ruthless,
torn up and hurting,
not knowing if i can love anymore.
Hate taints my heart,
polluting my soul,
my mind a whirlwind of senseless thoughts,
its dark and depressing here,
Am I not a child anymore?
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2003-09-18 02:25:00]
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Re: + Tainted Child +
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 03:01:40 AM AEST
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| i love the imagery you give.......reaching for a paradise.......great line....... |
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Re: + Tainted Child +
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by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 03:14:01 AM AEST
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This broke my heart.
Excellent write,
Sharon;) |
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Re: + Tainted Child +
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 03:51:42 AM AEST
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| Awesome and painful write. Splendid poem. |
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Re: + Tainted Child +
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 04:35:02 PM AEST
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Hey, this was friggin cool I loved the pain and the emotion you put into this. It was all so good and well written. I hope your feeling better now.
Bobo (Joel) |
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