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Jamie D

Contributed by loserkid on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The first time I heard your voice
Over the phone I told you the plan
I knew you were the girl of my choice
Like a crisp autumn wind you gave me your hand

As we drove I saw the flickering of the mild sun on your face
We were lost the five of us going no where
Thats when I found your state of grace
now you have me in your snare

Later as the stars came out of hidding we were alone
Thats when I saw the fire's shadow dancing on your face
hoping now both not longing for home
I saw the true beauty and knew that this was the place

As we shared stories of our past
The freezin gusts of wind drown out by the fire in your eyes
Now it seemed the night left too fast,
As we said our goodbyes

On the way home thinking on how much I wanted a kiss
not wanting to go to fast nor sound easy
But now as I sit in the autumn breeze,there goes me wish
Now that all has been said lets hope it's not to cheesie

I will never forget they ray of hope that both our souls shared
you are the one for me I fear,I just hope the feelings are the same

love,peace,unity
ory e
xoxoxo

Copyright © loserkid ... [ 2003-09-18 02:05:00]
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Re: Jamie D (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:31:56 AM AEST
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i will never forget the ray of hope.........really cool piece.....

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