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It's All Too Late
Contributed by
deathwriter
on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Everynight I sit and cry hoping you’ll come back to me.
I then realize you’ll never see how I see you through my eyes.
As all these thoughts of you run through my head, I wish
I could remember where I’ve layed the knife from the last time I cried
over you. As I search through my room, my eyes are filled with tears, I slowly
slit my wrist and watch the blood as it drips. I start walking back towards my desk,
where my suicide note awaits a signature. I sit over the letter as my tears wash away the words as the ocean waves do a sand castle. I finally sign it and next to it I lay a blood covered rose. I start slipping into unconsicousness, when out of no where you call me and ask me out again and say you still love me.
I say back “It’s a little late for that considering I’m already dying for your love”, he apologizes but I just say “ I’m sorry but it’s too late.” I hang up the phone and fall on the cold hard floor. As I lay there motionless from loss of blood..thoughts of you are still running through my head, as well as that one last moment when you said you still loved me. After it boggled my almost dead mind, I relized that this was a mistake, and now it’s all too late.
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deathwriter
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2003-09-17 22:45:00]
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Re: It's All Too Late
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:43:18 AM AEST
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i love the feel of this...it's so too late....we want to give them that last dig of pain......make them pay for our sorrow.....
after it boggled my almost dead mind.......i love that line..... |
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Re: It's All Too Late
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by RealCrystal on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 09:41:12 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem...with such irony, showed so much emotion, thnx for sharing |
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Re: It's All Too Late
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by Alyssa on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:14:51 AM AEST
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this is amazing. i think its one of mi favorites. you can realli feel her pain when she thinks he doesn't love her and the pain she must have felt when she realized it was all a mistake. awesome job.
lyss |
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