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Burnt kisses
Contributed by
Fwog
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She came to me with kisses
That set my heart afire
And I in my naivety
Followed my desire.
We danced the dance that lovers do
Vowed to love eternally
She pledged her troth
And swore she would be mine eternally.
Each night I held her in my arms
And eased away all fears
We danced beneath the moonlight
And laughed ourselves to tears.
Then one day she walked away
Seeking things she says she misses
She left me with a broken heart
And the taste of her burnt kisses.
Copyright ©
Fwog
... [
2003-09-17 22:25:00]
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Re: Burnt kisses
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 10:54:51 PM AEST
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Awww Dallas..welcome back!! This is such a beautifully written poem.. I'm sorry it ended on a sad note. Hope all is well with you.
Hugs from your small-island friend..
Jenni |
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Re: Burnt kisses
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:09:04 PM AEST
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sad but a nicely done piece...nice to see you back again
rosie |
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Re: Burnt kisses
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:54:07 AM AEST
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| Feelings that everyone can relate to..emotions that bring a tear..Congrats for a nice first piece of romance..oh and ..I didnt know you before but HEY!! Welcome Back!! lol |
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Re: Burnt kisses
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 01:57:05 AM AEST
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| Ahh Fwog, you have been sorely missed ... nice way to come back though, with a bittersweet romantic poem ... hope all is well with you and yours, take care ... Jan |
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Re: Burnt kisses
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by venkat on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 02:47:00 AM AEST
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| sad....but beautifully written.. venkat |
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Re: Burnt kisses
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 04:54:39 PM AEST
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| Burnt kisses only come when notes are not written for wifey' you know what I'm saying, this was an original Dal, glad your back, Love ya |
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Re: Burnt kisses
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 08:32:32 AM AEST
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| wow dallas! what a beautiful poem! more more! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Burnt kisses
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:16:47 PM AEST
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| Sadly beautiful. I really like the first stanza a lot. Wonderful stuff. Cheers! |
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