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I Am Alone
Contributed by
Night_Child
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My soul hides forbidden secrets
My life hidden behind a shadow of laughter
My pain cannot be seen
I'd give up everything to feel happy again
But that cannot happen
I am left to fight my demons alone
To cry alone
To die alone
These walls seem to close in
No one is here to wipe away my tears
I am alone
Can anyone hear me cry?
Why am I left to die?
Please help me....
I need you more then ever
All these years behind my own brick wall
Never showing any feeling
I'm ready to break this wall
I cry out your name
But only silence can be heard
I am alone
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Night_Child
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2003-09-17 22:05:00]
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Re: I Am Alone
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:40:03 AM AEST
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| but only silence can be heard...... great work.... |
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Re: I Am Alone
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by painted_echos on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:45:29 AM AEST
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this is sad, so very much. but there is hope in breaking down the walls...it usually hurts though. i wish for you a kindred spirit, night_child, and success in smashing that wall to bits.
out of your sadness, came a beautiful poem...you are heard. |
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Re: I Am Alone
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 04:39:39 PM AEST
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This is really good although it could be better if you used a thesaurus and spiced up the language a bit it was awesome nonetheless. I can relate quite a bit.
Bobo (Joel) |
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