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Bottom Line
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
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Don't let my tears distract you,drown the hurt I filled you with
Please don't file away your feelings,always wondering,what if
Open up and release the anger,express to me the pain I caused
Don't let it eat away at you,then break down behind closed doors
The best that I can say right now,is that an apology seems lame
And in your eyes I fear inside,to you,I'll never look the same
I know you're all forgiving,understanding and lovingly prepared
To not throw away the memories,dreams and love we've shared
Yet somewhere deep inside me,I have changed and cannot find
Any reason to believe, that I truly deserve to hold you as mine
I'm searching through my feelings,such a nightmare,though awake
This lifetime could never be enough, to ever forget my mistake
I will make no promises to you,for my faith in myself has died
But I can't say I've failed to give it a go,at least until I've tried
Destiny will play its part,all I can do is find some kind of flow
And of all that haunts and confuses me,there's still one thing I know....
~ I Love You~
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LovingWhispers
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2003-09-17 21:45:00]
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Re: Bottom Line
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 10:15:10 PM AEST
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| The love in this really shows in your words,Great work! Christina |
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Re: Bottom Line
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 10:43:21 PM AEST
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Whispers, this is truly lovely....sincerity rules..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Bottom Line
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by PoloRM on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 10:48:31 PM AEST
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You love him, he loves you too
You've made mistakes and weren't true
If he still want to be with you
Why are you then feeling so blue?
If he can see it in your eyes
That's an apology from the skies
If he wants to forgive you still
You shouldn't try to pay a bill.
Keep love simple, you've only one life
I'll hope you'll finally get out, out of this strife. |
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Re: Bottom Line
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:13:48 PM AEST
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the bottom line is what really matters...well said...hugs
rosie |
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Re: Bottom Line
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:17:42 PM AEST
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| No more tears baby. Roses at your feet forever. |
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Re: Bottom Line
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 02:04:06 AM AEST
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| Take care Sharon ... don't tear yourself apart - your love is too great to not survive ... this is beautifully written ... Jan |
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Re: Bottom Line
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 05:28:45 AM AEST
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have been where you are...made it through the rough times...this is a great write
Shari |
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Re: Bottom Line
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 07:22:19 AM AEST
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| you don't know what love is . your faith should die you deceitful witch. |
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