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Contributed by
believer
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I WISH UPON A STAR
I wish upon a star
that beyond all the bitterness,
my dreams would never be too far.
I wish that love and respect
would become something we all gave.
so all the young ones
could all be saved.
I wish that candles never burned out,
and stories didn't have to end.
so when we crossed the final page...
we wouldn't have to start all over again.
I wish that people
could see each other for who they really are
instead of taking whats on the outside,
and doubting us to get very far.
I wish for people to share a moment
when sudden reality hits the mind.
blocking out the rest of the world,
to find out whats behind someone elses eyes.
I wish a big wish tonight
on three *speacial* stars
I wish for good in things
and not the bad
I wish for people to smile more often
instead of being sad.
as it comes to the end of my wish......
"I wish I may, I wish I might,
I wish these wishes, I've wished tonight"
BELIEVER
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believer
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2003-09-17 18:05:00]
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Re: No Title
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:20:02 PM AEST
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| Love it! |
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by OpalDragon on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:56:49 PM AEST
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I believe you have made some wonderful wishes and a very good poem
OD |
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:44:17 PM AEST
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I totally agree and wish with you. Awesome write.
Emma. |
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by painted_echos on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 01:02:00 AM AEST
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| thank you, this was so uplifting. i will remember it when i look at the night sky. |
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