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For the last time, Daddy
Contributed by
Aika
on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I was standing there
staring in them
two blue springs
they were so deep
I knew I saw them
today for the last time
For the last time
I could read in your eyes
in that short while I read more
than I could believe so
Those lovely years we experieneced
and your love, Dad,
my son was just born
and we gave him name Tom
and I am sorry,
that you both could not live
that you had to leave
But Daddy I knew
you had to..
too big was your pain
and that night I prayed
your ache eased
so that you could stay in peace
That Tuesday morn
at 1.50 the clock has stopped
and I hope
I just believe
you are in paradise, Daddy.....
I loved you so!!!!!!!!
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-09-17 15:45:00]
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Re: For the last time, Daddy
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:56:45 PM AEST
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| i am so happy for you that you have pure happy memories.........i am truly deeply sorry for your loss........he's waiting patiently........ |
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Re: For the last time, Daddy
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by VampiricSuccubus on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:20:32 PM AEST
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| This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. Great work! Congrats on your new life and I'm sorry for your loss at the same time. What a sucky situation. |
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Re: For the last time, Daddy
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by S_K_Williamson on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:24:49 PM AEST
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I wipe tears as I write this. I am so sorry for your loss.(((hugs)))) I am so glad you know you will be together again one day.
A beautiful tribute to your Daddy.
Sharon;) |
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Re: For the last time, Daddy
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 08:01:47 PM AEST
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Oh so sad. Awesome write to your dad. Lovely to have such memories to share with your son.
Emma. |
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Re: For the last time, Daddy
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 10:19:21 PM AEST
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| I know your feelings on this write,I lost my mom & now I'm pregnent with my third a baby she will never see it hurts! Christina |
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Re: For the last time, Daddy
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by gery_giggles on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:22:20 AM AEST
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| this is a sad but good poem.. |
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Re: For the last time, Daddy
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 12:56:58 PM AEST
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When you read a poem that sends a shiver through you,
you know it has touched your soul.
This truly touched mine, huggs
xx steve |
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