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Limerick No. 1
Contributed by
aboutdesouffle
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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There once was a lady from Sproket
Who went into work on a rocket
The rocket when bang!
Her trousers went twang!
And blew up her lunch in her pocket
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aboutdesouffle
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2003-09-17 15:25:00]
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Re: Limerick No. 1
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 03:39:26 PM AEST
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...And she deserved it too.....This was great!! I really enjoyed this... Thanks for sharing...and tell your Mom she should write more.....
Jenni |
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Re: Limerick No. 1
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 05:46:23 PM AEST
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This poem is so charming! I love it, it made me smile! Tell your mom great job!
Love Joy and Peace,
jellybellyprincess |
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Re: Limerick No. 1
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by aboutdesouffle on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 02:41:26 PM AEST
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Thank you both for your kind comments. I don't think I will write anymore poems... I'll quit whilst I am ahead!
Best wishes
Aboutdesouffle's long suffering mum |
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Re: Limerick No. 1
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by Saira on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 04:59:57 PM AEST
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This is so wonderfully written....lol....your mom really gave me a good laugh. I enjoyed it a lot. Your mom is great! Thanks to her!
Saira |
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Re: Limerick No. 1
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by Kirby on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:43:53 PM AEST
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| ok since you asdked to be kind..i will...glad that she won something. Everyone deserves to win something with their poetry. Love:::Kirby |
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Re: Limerick No. 1
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by Elena on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:16:03 PM AEST
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Give your mum a jug.
E |
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Re: Limerick No. 1
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by Elena on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:17:40 PM AEST
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Sorry, that was a spelling mistake. Give your mum a hug.
E |
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Re: Limerick No. 1
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:20:30 PM AEST
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| gotta love karma,lol |
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Re: Limerick No. 1
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by feralpen on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 09:14:34 PM AEST
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The limerick is not only funny, it meets the criteria of the form very well. The meter and rhyme are great. It has the last line 'hook' and reads smoothly ... as a limerick should.
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