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Searchin myself
Contributed by
lilsk8ergurl9
on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Needing you.
Can't let go.
Sad and lone,
Should not show.
Feelings hurt,
Going on.
Gonna write,
A sad sad song.
Over the edge,
In to deep.
Feeling things,
I need to beat.
Giving in,
Going down.
Once again,
I hear a sad sad sound.
Copyright ©
lilsk8ergurl9
... [
2003-09-17 15:05:00]
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Re: Searchin myself
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 05:05:44 PM AEST
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| Excellent. You portrayed your emotion in a very precise way. Good job! |
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Re: Searchin myself
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 05:23:10 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem. Convaying your emontions in such a tender way. Marvelous write. |
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Re: Searchin myself
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by OpalDragon on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:59:27 PM AEST
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bittersweet good write
OD |
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Re: Searchin myself
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 08:06:15 PM AEST
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So sad, I hope that the things that you feel you can beat them. Awesome poem. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Searchin myself
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by painted_echos on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 01:27:51 AM AEST
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| this is really an awesome write, i am sorry it has to hurt so much. thank you for sharing...i truly felt this one |
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