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It Cuts Like A Knife
Contributed by
ruby1987
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It hurts to talk,
It hurts to breathe,
Love feels like an invitation for pain,
The heart beats tiredly in strain.
Afraid all the time,
I’ll be blamed for someone else’s crime,
I am afraid everyday of my life,
Since you have been gone it cuts like a knife,
Goodbye is so hard to say,
When your life is spent with that one person everyday.
Copyright ©
ruby1987
... [
2003-09-17 13:45:00]
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Re: It Cuts Like A Knife
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 05:35:25 PM AEST
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| I very sorry to hear of your loss. I hope you can cope with the pain somehow. |
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Re: It Cuts Like A Knife
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by OpalDragon on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:02:54 PM AEST
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so very sad, I wish the best for you, a good write
OD |
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Re: It Cuts Like A Knife
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 08:18:16 PM AEST
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It is like you are going through exactly what I have been going through for the last year and still am. The last line about seeing them everyday, oh how you must miss them. I feel your pain deep. I hope that you can heal faster and with more success of not bringing the pain back unlike me. Excellent write. Thank you for sharing.
Love Emma. |
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