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Loves Path
Contributed by
crow
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If love would come
but one more time.
No questions asked
nothing need answered.
A sun burns stars from the sky,
at night to walk loves path again.
As fierce the spirit might seem to be,
quiet touch consumes dark hours.
To bear his heart,
a thousands wars,
and welcome defeat...... Crow
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2003-09-17 13:25:00]
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Re: Loves Path
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:31:56 PM AEST
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i very much like this one, crow; it is beautifully written (as i find all of your poetry is), and it is hope. should i not open my heart, then i spare myself hurt...but then, i'd also deny myself the joy of love. good for you, keep your heart open. painted_echos
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Re: Loves Path
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:54:59 PM AEST
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| if i had the chance to do it all over again.......would I? yes!!!!! |
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Re: Loves Path
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 05:29:54 PM AEST
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| Magnificent simply magnificent. Can't say anymore. Speechless! |
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Re: Loves Path
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 05:33:07 PM AEST
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absoulutely beautiful
Shari |
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Re: Loves Path
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:44:17 PM AEST
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| Such true words ... a beautiful poem Crow ... Jan |
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Re: Loves Path
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by Alisialynn on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 08:36:27 PM AEST
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| :-) I love it. |
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Re: Loves Path
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 09:25:47 PM AEST
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Times spent pondering our souls,our hearts...Stop thinking about it and go for it.You have much to offer the right woman :)
And she better be good to you or else lol |
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