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Love Is Beautiful
Contributed by
ruby1987
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Everyone says to stay away from love,
But i think that love is as pure as a white dove,
It gives you a feeling so deep,
That inside you cannot keep,
It makes you smlie,
And not just for a while,
It brings the sunlight on a rainy day,
You feel like your floating and dancing in May,
Its colours never wash away,
Love is always here to stay,
It may hide so you cannot see,
Just like pearls lost in the sea,
Just like the petals of a Rose delicately made,
Love has all sorts of beautiful shades
Copyright ©
ruby1987
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2003-09-17 13:05:00]
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Re: Love Is Beautiful
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 05:34:50 PM AEST
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Awesome writing! I love this one. Great job!
Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess
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Re: Love Is Beautiful
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 09:29:08 PM AEST
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| I think this is a very pretty piece, good work. Crow |
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Re: Love Is Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 06:36:07 PM AEST
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Do you notice though the people who tell you to stay away from love are normally the most miserable! good write this one.
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