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When Did We Fall?
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I've come to hate this world we live in
Full of selfishness and greed
Everyone with all their needs
I've come to hate the person I am
But they all made me this way
So what else can I say?
We're all so jaded and vain
And I'm suffocating
The pain is all that remains
I'm asphyxiating
I hope this gets better at the end
And I'm not so full of hate
But are we all too late?
I hope someone still cares about love
What a family should be
And not turn their back or flee
We've all reached the last thin straw
Everything is broken
And too damn frozen to thaw
It all goes unspoken
It's too late to turn back now
And we've all lost so much
But nobody cares somehow
Everyone wants a crutch
It's so sad because it's such a waste
This world is going to hell
Were you there when we all fell?
I don't think we'll ever get back up
The good things are hard to find
Forever two hearts entwined
So I'll always run to you
'Cause nothing else matters
The one thing that remains true
We will never shatter
We'll go to a better place
Our love is more than this
It will be our saving grace
We alone will reach bliss
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-09-17 11:45:00]
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Re: When Did We Fall?
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:53:00 AM AEST
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| Heh. I was going to write a similiar poem on this theme but you've saved me the trouble. It's not really the world, it's what's in it that's rotten. |
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Re: When Did We Fall?
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:48:52 PM AEST
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| Excellent write ... very profound - Jan |
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Re: When Did We Fall?
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by S_K_Williamson on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:21:37 PM AEST
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Wow...this kinda struck home for me today.
Excellent write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: When Did We Fall?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 09:28:06 PM AEST
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| I feel the same way... |
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