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Anxiety Attack
Contributed by
EmSal
on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There is a hole,
So deep in me,
Corroding my soul,
Destroying everything that used to be.
I didn’t realise it was there.
If I did then I just ignored it.
Loneliness is something I can’t bare,
It’s more painful than being hit.
So I carry on.
Suffered at night,
When everyone was gone,
That’s when my mind and emotion would fight.
I’d cry long and hard,
Desperate thoughts would fill my head,
Felt like I was barred,
And freedom I would not find.
Let it all out they say,
To make you feel better,
To see a new day,
To read a positive letter.
Believe me I tried,
But the pain can’t be stopped.
Way too much I have cried,
My sanity I have dropped.
Still no one may know,
Until one day you lose it,
You’re on your lowest low,
And you have an anxiety fit.
Copyright ©
EmSal
... [
2003-09-17 04:35:00]
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Re: Anxiety Attack
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by hazelnut on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:41:30 AM AEST
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| i can relate, i've felt this before. |
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Re: Anxiety Attack
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:28:04 AM AEST
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| I'm in the same boat as hazelnut. I'll be on the lookout for the followup to this one, which is actually already very good. |
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Re: Anxiety Attack
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:42:56 PM AEST
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| i'm there....right with you.....looking forward to the follow up |
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Re: Anxiety Attack
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 08:02:21 PM AEST
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This was great I loved it all. The rhyming was an intelligent bit of work to. I hope you don't get anymore of these attacks their shit I know. Lookin forward to the next one.
Bobo (Joel) |
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