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Slip Away
Contributed by
sodapopsuicide
on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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He said
I'm leaving
& if you want
maybe
I could take you with me
maybe
we could fall
[together]
I watched you slip
slip slowly away
down
down
you slipped away
I watched you let go
of the ledge you hung onto
for so long
and I saw you fall
Now you're lying
motionless
at the bottom
I didn't let you
take me with you
why didn't I just go
it would've been easier
but I said no
[I'm sorry darling]
I watched you slip
slip slowly away
down
down
you slipped away
I watched you let go
of the ledge you hung onto
for so long
and I saw you fall
So now you're gone
and he thinks it's funny
but I said no
and I cried for you, dear
I wouldn't let him, dear
because I loved you, dear
please take me with you
[next time]
I watched you slip
slip slowly away
down
down
you slipped away
I watched you let go
of the ledge you hung onto
for so long
and I saw you fall ----->
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2003-09-17 01:05:00]
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Re: Slip Away
(User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:19:34 AM AEST
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Sad write here, awesome nonetheless. Thank you for sharing...
Emma. |
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Re: Slip Away
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by VampiricSuccubus on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:26:18 PM AEST
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| Excelent write, though it rings in my head sadly. Great work |
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