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Grace
Contributed by
Manda2
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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When he took the hand of Grace,
A single trickle stroked my burning face.
When his soft lashes blinked a love-filled gaze,
My confusion turned to hurt on my release from the haze.
As he whispered words from a truly devoted heart,
The thumping in my chest began its' fearful start.
Her voice was a melody as she spoke of their eternity,
And my pain became my agony, for I knew he'd found his destiny.
And around their secret tree,
The early Autumn breeze, twirled the crispy leaves,
And I wished that I was her and she was me.
At last he kissed her precious white hand,
And I slowly slid off my one year gold band.
Copyright ©
Manda2
... [
2003-09-16 23:45:00]
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Re: Grace
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 12:03:34 AM AEST
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| o` my heart is breaking. very good write I like this. Crow |
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Re: Grace
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 12:37:40 AM AEST
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| ouch! (((huggers))) This is so very sad.Well written and i love the imagery you projected :) |
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Re: Grace
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 02:21:36 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc...This was so sad..but so well written...I felt your pain..
Jenni |
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Re: Grace
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:32:18 AM AEST
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Ouch... wow... that's awful. So much pain... I'll send a hug your way.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Grace
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:12:26 PM AEST
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I think you captured the feeling of Secret Love wonderfully. I've actually done Secret Love poetry, and I've lived it. I absolutely love this poem! Keep writing, and let's hope this turns out to have a happy ending!
Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess |
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Re: Grace
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by KiSwaters on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 01:22:34 PM AEST
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| I love your imagery, and the detail along with the pace of the poem. It's a sad, sucky situation though. Sorry. |
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