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In The Darkness
Contributed by
xlx_chelsea_xlx
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The darkness of the night is closing in
The wind gets colder on my skin
It feels as if life is slipping away
Those happy thoughts will never stay
Im left here in the still of the night
left here by myself to fight
for whatever warmth is here
Im lost and the path is not clear.
Walking through the dark unknown
not realizing how much colder it has grown
I think here in this darkness, I am dying
The last thought I have Is you crying
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2003-09-16 22:45:00]
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Re: In The Darkness
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:26:11 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc..this is lovely..The imagery is great..
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Re: In The Darkness
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:34:46 PM AEST
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I liked this poem, especially the ending. Good write.
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