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I remember you when it rains
Contributed by
xlx_chelsea_xlx
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Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
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I remember you when it rains
The way you made me cry
You said you needed time
Pain is in your heart and I know why
I remember you when it rains
I never meant to hurt you
You were the best thing I ever had
I said what I said because it was true
I remember you when it rains
The drops fall hard against the ground
I wish I could touch your face
A place in my heart you had found
I remember you when it rains
I can hear you crying
I can feel your tears
I am helpless, there is no use in trying.
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Re: I remember you when it rains
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:40:32 PM AEST
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| wow..so sad :( But I loved it :) |
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Re: I remember you when it rains
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:28:09 PM AEST
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Such a lovely poem, but oh...so sad... Hope things are better now..
Jenni |
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Re: I remember you when it rains
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:49:34 PM AEST
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The pain both of you are going through, this made me think of the problem I am going through at the moment, but I am on the receiving end of the pain, but htis poem expalins the pain from the otehr persons viewpoint, made me think. Thank you so much your words touched me. Absolutely Awesome Poem.
Love Emma. |
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Re: I remember you when it rains
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:22:11 AM AEST
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LOVE the title!! Love the poem too, it's amazing. I just wanna read it over and over...
~ Moonlit |
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Re: I remember you when it rains
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:33:24 PM AEST
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a place in my heart you had found.....
lovethis....cool piece..... |
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