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Last Request
Contributed by
walt
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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Mother mother wipe my forehead
let my memory be
in the glory of the garden
by a tall chestnut tree
Like the wind that echoes
place for all to see
a prayer to the God
that sets my spirit free
Weeping is for children
none of this for me
just a bush of roses
planted by the tree
Mother hold me close
let the last day be
a honor to our friendship
set next to me until I'm free
When I have gone to heaven
listen for me
I will talk to you
in the wind in the tree
Mother mother wipe my forehead
say a short prayer with me
as God takes my spirit
at last from pain I will be free.
Copyright ©
walt
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2003-09-16 13:35:00]
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Re: Last Request
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 05:57:14 PM AEST
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Theres a sadness in this and yet I found it very peaceful
"Mother hold me close
let the last day be
a honor to our friendship
set next to me until I'm free "
Really like this verse |
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Re: Last Request
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by lilch4ever on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 10:31:04 PM AEST
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| This was very good with a hint of sadness. Nicely written. |
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Re: Last Request
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by Broken921 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:43:04 AM AEST
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| Nice work !!! |
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