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Autumn Rain
Contributed by
cant-skate
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
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Leaving with twilight though I was chosen
To wander the way in the darkest of nights
Oh in the summer sun how soon i came to stray
A true damnation when I turned away
So fell autumn rain washed away all my pain
I feel brighter somehow lighter somehow to breath once
again
So fell autumn rain washed my sorrows away
With the sunset behind somehow I find the dreams are
to stay
So fell autumn rain
Blinded by dawning so you would take me
Futher away away from the fall
Oh you told me I must never dream again
A true damnation you left me the pain
So fell autumn rain but all things must pass
So fell autumn rain washed away all my pain
I feel brighter somehow lighter somehow to breath once
again
So tell autumn rain washed my sorrows away
With the sunset behind somehow I find the dreams are
to stay
So fell winter
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2003-09-16 12:05:00]
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Re: Autumn Rain
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 12:20:37 PM AEST
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I LOVE THIS!!!!! You had a true stroke of brilliance when you wrote this. I wanna hear it as a song someday, dammit!! Don't keep me waiting long. :)
Officially your #1 fan,
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Autumn Rain
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 12:28:16 PM AEST
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so fell winter..........
yes it is coming isn't it??? along with the darkness.........
beautiful write.......i agree......true brilliance...... |
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