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If I Told You
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I told you I cared,
What would you do?
If I told you I loved you,
Would you love me too?
If I told you I wanted you,
What would you say?
If I told you I needed you,
Would you just turn away?
If I told you my feelings,
How would you react?
If I told you my feelings,
Would they have any impact?
I want to tell you,
Just how I feel.
But how would you know,
If my feelings are real?
You will have to trust me,
You will have to know.
That deep in my heart,
I love you so.
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ShadowsCloud
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Re: If I Told You
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:39:54 AM AEST
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lovely
michelle |
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Re: If I Told You
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by faffeee on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:17:31 AM AEST
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| simple but sweet and effective! shows you don't always need fancy words to write a good poem! xxx |
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Re: If I Told You
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 03:38:08 PM AEST
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hey chick i do like this and i could say that this is good
i think youre telling those people how you feel |
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Re: If I Told You
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by loserkid on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:51:23 PM AEST
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Holy hell this is kick a$$ I wish I could give this to me special someone
peace,love,unity
ory
xoxoxo |
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Re: If I Told You
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 12:25:19 AM AEST
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| this is very pretty, simple and a very good read. I enjoyed it. Crow |
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Re: If I Told You
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:49:22 PM AEST
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| Candice Hey Girl. Where Have You Been? I Haven't Seen You Online. Write Me Please |
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