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Broken hearts never mend
Contributed by
ravi
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Coffe black,cigarettes,tired eyes,dusty roads,
yet another day begins without you.
I still go to work as usual,
but with a masked,artificial smile.
I still spend evenings watching comedy movies,
but use the darkness to cry out my heart.
Some broken hearts never mend,
my love for you never ends.
Girls still find me charming and cool,
but I try to find you in each one of them.
I still go to parties,joke with friends,
but even in a crowd,I now feel alone.
I still play tennis in foggy mornings,
but now I am the ball and fate the racquet.
Some broken hearts never mend,
my love for you never ends.
Copyright ©
ravi
... [
2003-09-16 04:05:00]
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Re: Broken hearts never mend
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 04:19:40 AM AEST
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so very sad
Shari |
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Re: Broken hearts never mend
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:26:57 AM AEST
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Love the tennis metaphor! Great poem, I love the everyday-bare-bones-of-life sort of feel to it.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Broken hearts never mend
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:34:50 PM AEST
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I loved this so unbelievably great and something I can relate to a lot.
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Re: Broken hearts never mend
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by nite_jade on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:37:07 AM AEST
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| that is so true they dont ever mend i love your poem and from pomes that i read i understand how to right mine thanks |
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