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JUS FOOLING MYSELF
Contributed by
emystar
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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My heart would throb
at your name.
Didn't realize we were
playing a game.
Gave nothing but
total luv, comfort,
understanding,
peace of doves.
Oh boy, was I
jus fooling myself,
always offering my
very best.
Thought you needed
me 2 . Was jus fooling
myself, it's true.
Keep it all, free it
someday
Luv's no good till
u give it away.
Keep it bottled up tight
and you'll never get it right.
Should have known
all along that
luving you was
all wrong.
This story is
older than me
only one sided luv
now I comprenda, see?
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-09-16 03:05:00]
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Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 04:21:52 AM AEST
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awww, stand tall, there is someone out there that will see the gem you are...
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Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 05:22:00 AM AEST
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| emy, hope your good, great write Crow |
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Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:22:23 AM AEST
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very nice flow..very thoughtful you are..welldone..peace..luv and blessings
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Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 03:28:46 AM AEST
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| Great poem! Peace be with you. |
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Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:04:43 AM AEST
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Your poetry has a gentleness and yet says what it has to say with such impact. such a
lovely peace emy. Your work is so uniquely
you that it comforts even the most hardend of hearts. You could soothe a disbeliever into
believing.
((((((((emystar)))))))))
Ben |
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