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FLAT ON MY FACE 2 CRY
Contributed by
emystar
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
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Dad, went 2 your room
fell flat on my face
2 cry.
Your gentle soul said
Now, there's only one
place 2 go
Flat on my face
2 cry.
Flat on my face
2 cry,
moan, sigh.
That pillow soaked
with tears,
all these years
thru fear
Flat on my face
2 cry.
Daddy's heart said
there's only one way
2 go kid.
give your pillow
every lonely thought.
Victry's been won
no need for talk.
Flat on my face
2 cry.
Put on the breastplate
of righteousness
fet shod in luv
Now only way's up
Drink victors cup.
Flat on my face
2 cry
Yeah, getting
up,
bye, bye.
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emystar
... [
2003-09-16 02:05:00]
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Re: FLAT ON MY FACE 2 CRY
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 02:13:01 AM AEST
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Heart touching poem..especially these lines
are extremely beautiful..
"there's only one way 2 go kid.
give your pillow every lonely thought.
Victry's been won no need for talk."
"Put on the breastplate of righteousness
fet shod in luv Now only way's up
Drink victors cup."
blessings emy.. venkat
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Re: FLAT ON MY FACE 2 CRY
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 02:17:02 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem. |
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Re: FLAT ON MY FACE 2 CRY
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 04:24:10 AM AEST
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that is the way let it all out, then get up and go on...strong write
Shari |
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Re: FLAT ON MY FACE 2 CRY
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 05:15:15 AM AEST
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| a little sad remembering, good write Crow |
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Re: FLAT ON MY FACE 2 CRY
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by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:30:01 AM AEST
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Beautiful write.
Sharon;) |
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