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Lay Me Down
Contributed by
merry
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Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I just want to lay you down
Feel your arms hard around me
Rest my cheek against your chest
Feel your heart beat next to mine
Soothe the sorrow in your eyes
There are words of tenderness
Just beyond our reach tonight
Stubbornness keeps us apart
From sweet tangled tongues entwine
No matter the distance
We sleep under the same canopy sky
And the fire in you warms
The cold places in my heart
When you lay me down
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merry
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2003-09-16 00:35:00]
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Re: Lay Me Down
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 12:44:30 AM AEST
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| Such tenderness..Lovely :) |
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Re: Lay Me Down
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 01:18:32 AM AEST
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| i like this, good write! Crow |
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Re: Lay Me Down
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 01:18:36 AM AEST
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| sweet thought.. lovely write. venkat |
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Re: Lay Me Down
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 01:43:01 AM AEST
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Beautifull!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: Lay Me Down
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 02:18:39 AM AEST
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Tender and loving words. Beautiful write.
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Re: Lay Me Down
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 03:22:40 AM AEST
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| can hear a song in these words..rosie |
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Re: Lay Me Down
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:21:49 AM AEST
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calming, romantic, and hopeful a pure delight
michelle |
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