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Tracing Circles
Contributed by
merry
on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My fingers know the way there and back again
Circles in the sand
Swirling, twirling patterns
Lazily they run
In strings down to the sea
I close my eyes and see them
Fire red and gold
Circles behind my eyes
Wildly dancing orbs
To keep me company
My fingers know the way there and back again
Caught in my breath
The soft entrancing rhythms
Repetitive motion
The circles linger on
Copyright ©
merry
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2003-09-15 23:35:00]
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Re: Tracing Circles
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 12:47:30 AM AEST
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| Im guessing this write comes from being lost in thought??..I like it ;) |
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Re: Tracing Circles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 02:21:01 AM AEST
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| Marvelous picture drawn by your words. Awesome poem! |
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Re: Tracing Circles
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 03:59:29 AM AEST
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had me lost in thought....fascinating write..great flow..is there such a word as mezmerized?
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