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Our Love?
Contributed by
Night_Child
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Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The love I thought we had
Where did it go?
You say Forever we will be
But its lost all feeling
My emotions rise and fall
Happy one minute
In tears the next
Wondering if you truly mean the words
I love you
Did I do something wrong?
Please tell me
My bodys numb from all the tears
You've changed
But I don't know why
I just want you back
The way you were
I want to know you mean every word you say
Sitting here alone
I think of you
A cold rain runs the ink of this poem
Tears run down my face
If I left tomorrow,
Would you care?
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Night_Child
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2003-09-15 18:35:00]
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Re: Our Love?
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by emystar on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 09:29:31 PM AEST
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I know this one too well.
Personally I always said, f*ck u and ended it but that doesn't mean I was always right, only that I reached my wits end.
I'm sure it isn't something u did. Usually it's the one that hurts another endlessly that did the wrong.
Take it easy on yourself.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy
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Re: Our Love?
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by EmSal on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 10:24:56 PM AEST
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Don't say it isn't one of your best (Even though I have done it and I've been told off mind you!) because it is from your heart and soul and this is how you feel and others can relate to this perfectly. I know I can say that I understand this poem, and I hope that everything will be okay in time.
Emma. |
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Re: Our Love?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 03:43:14 AM AEST
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Marvelous write. I like the question at the end sheer brilliance. Great poem!
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