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***California***
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The sun is always shining in Califonia.
Everybody's happy, you wouldn't want to miss it.
Surfs up dudes! in sunny California.
Everybody's living and you really shouldn't miss it.
It's easy in California, to follow your dreams.
It's easy in California, at least it always seems.
Colours are bright, even the night, no one ever dares to kill in California,
Oh how I wish, I wish that I was born there,
in California.
Sunny California- the closest place to Heaven,
well I live in Sussex, the closest place to Hell on Earth.
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broken-glass
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2003-09-15 04:35:00]
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Re: ***California***
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by S_K_Williamson on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 09:56:05 AM AEST
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I was born in California. It is very beautiful there. I just do not like to live at that high rate of speed....to me life is to savor.
I would love to see Sussex!
great write,
Sharon;) |
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Re: ***California***
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 11:41:35 AM AEST
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"no one ever dares to kill in California"
look what happened yesterday in LA to the sister of the tennis players. I think California's just like any other place when you minus all the hype.
Good write though. |
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Re: ***California***
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by knowWhat_kind on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:05:55 PM AEST
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| I really like what you wrote, I would maybe like to go there to but just for a visit. Although I really like how you wrote this. |
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