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Just My Soul
Contributed by
SecretlyMia
on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Just My Soul
and i can sit here and cry an ocean
but i could never explain it
i could wish to take back so many things
but they've already taken toll
~i think im finally breaking, maybe just my soul~
and i could hurt so bad i want to hurt me
but it just wont dissapear
i could fall into this emptiness
but i cant take back these tears
and as much as i try to close my eyes
and wish myself away from everything
when i do i still hear you, i still feel it
its killing me and i cant let you know
~i think im finally breaking, maybe just my soul~
and i cant tell you to understand it
because unless you're me, you couldnt
i cant beg you to notice my hurt
fallen wishes prove you wouldnt
and i cant stop crying no matter how much i try
but i do know that someday youll see
deep inside i was dying, falling into pieces
losing everything, i felt so bitter cold
~i felt like i was breaking,but it was just my soul~
WRITTEN BY CAMIE PRIEST
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SecretlyMia
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Re: Just My Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 03:32:59 AM AEST
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| So much emotion and heartbreak wrapped up in this marvelous poem. Great poem. Peace be with you. |
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Re: Just My Soul
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 05:53:57 PM AEST
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wow this was so good and so filled with emotion and pain it describes a lot of how i feel. Thnx for sharing this I enjoyed it a lot.
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Re: Just My Soul
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by SecretlyMia on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 06:21:16 PM AEST
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Thanks for replying guys!!!
it means a lot!
camie |
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