|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Brittle
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
In pursuing you I went and lost myself
Snared by shallow oaths and words
To the eye I am the emblem of sentience
But I'm fading on the inside,
slowly devoured by the filth that is me.
Heaven knows where I have been all this while
Too tumultous to be revealed
But in the wish of redemption
I ceased to be existing
And now solitude is the omega
in my alphabet.
Copyright ©
Avarice_Riot
... [
2003-09-14 16:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Brittle
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 02:45:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Great write ... well said ... Jan |
|
|
Re: Brittle
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 04:19:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Short, sweet, and to the point. Awesome poem! |
|
|
Re: Brittle
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 03:37:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I'm sorry, if such a thing has happened to you. Anyway, you expressed yourself well. Good poem. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
