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was it me?
Contributed by
squeakymouse
on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Like a leaf caught in a whirlpool
I watched your downward spiral.
Time after countless time
I offered you my hand
only to have you slap it away.
Almost proud of your despair,
you closed yourself away
until you disappeared from me.
What should I have done?
Or was it something that I did
that drove your machine of pain?
Was it me at all?
Could this just have been
the enigmatic way
you wanted it to be?
In the end, you told me nothing
at all.
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squeakymouse
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2003-09-14 12:05:00]
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Re: was it me?
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by painted_echos on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 12:41:26 PM AEST
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i liked this, good write.
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Re: was it me?
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by roisin on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 01:53:33 PM AEST
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interesting piece...
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Re: was it me?
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by EmSal on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 02:07:56 AM AEST
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Oh wow I wish I had someone to offer their hand but I guess I'm a little like the person whom your describing because I haven't been able to let anyone help me because it feels like I deserve it, it's what I know. I'm sure it wasn't you, I'm sure they appriciated what you could've done. I know I would have. Thanks for sharing. I love it.
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