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Created Illusion on paper
Contributed by
ruby1987
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Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm living on your pages,
I'm formed by the ink in your pen,
You write me in different images,
While you sit and cry in your secret den
As you write you wish for me to be real,
But you know that i can only live between the lines,
Still you write me a heart and how to feel,
And now all your pain is apart of mine
Your mind created me to comfort you,
But reality denies me a life,
So then all your feelings of pain grew deeper inside you,
And now i'm Left unfinished on this page ever since you put your heart through that knife.
Copyright ©
ruby1987
... [
2003-09-14 10:45:00]
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Re: Created Illusion on paper
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 12:46:10 PM AEST
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Ruby, Ruby, Ruby...... First poem? I don't know, but it definitely didn't seem like it! The whole scenario was keeping me guessing- who is this person in the poem? what's happening between the two? It really made me think. Great writings tend to do that. Awesome job!
Love Joy and Peace,
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Re: Created Illusion on paper
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 02:11:47 AM AEST
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very well written
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