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Love me, Hate me
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 09:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Stare into my hollow eyes
Kill me with your gaze
Freeze my heart forever
Bring the end to my days
***** up my mind
Burn my soul
Give your true self to me
Make me feel whole
Kiss me, Hurt me
Dont ask why
Love me, Hate me
Let me die
Touch me in your innocent way
Hold me when you're depressed
Beat me when you're angry
Take out on me what you've repressed
Love me, in the worst way
Give unto me all the pain I need
Do things you'd never do
Break me, make me bleed
Kiss me, Hurt me
Dont ask why
Love me, Hate me
Let me die
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 07:07:19 PM AEST
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This was awesome! You should write more although I hope this isn't actually happening to you. I loved the rhyming once again a great write.
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by Tanna on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:19:26 AM AEST
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I agree... this is amazing. Very dark, some what sinister.
I love this line...
"Stare into my hollow eyes
Kill me with your gaze
Freeze my heart forever
Bring the end to my days"
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by Cancer on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 10:00:07 PM AEST
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is it true love, or masochistic overdrive? only her hairdresser knows for sure. groovy piece, killer subject. love to hear it to music.
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