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Alone
Contributed by
squeesh
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Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 07:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm surrounded
Yet I'm so alone
I can't hear these voices
I can't feel the warm touch
They're reaching out to me
But I'm Turning with shame
Theres cries and fears
Are bringing me down
Shoving me away
Rejected from time
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squeesh
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2003-09-14 07:25:00]
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Re: Alone
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 07:29:04 AM AEST
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Awww so sad, I hope you can find out what the problem is so that you don't have to turn and feel so alone.
Emma. |
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Re: Alone
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by faffeee on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 03:11:47 PM AEST
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| im so sorry you feel like this, its so sad that so many people have to go through this. i've written a poem along the same lines - trying to escape the loneliness - its good to know someone else understands. good luck xxx |
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Re: Alone
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:15:49 PM AEST
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Good poem..one with which I'm sure many can relate.
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Alone
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:50:54 PM AEST
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The first two lines describe exactly how I feel made me shudder. Good short write straight to the point.
Bobo (Joel) |
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