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Falsifying Dreams
Contributed by
merry
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Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 06:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sweat is damp upon my back
I kick the blankets off
Stare at the ceiling
Remember every color
Texture and feeling
That eager pleasure
Returns to heat my skin
Makes me restless and uneasy
Without anyplace to hide
From thoughts inside my head
My eyes trace your outline in the dark
You’re even breathing in and out
What secrets do you keep?
~merry~
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merry
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2003-09-14 06:45:00]
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Re: Falsifying Dreams
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 07:07:38 AM AEST
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I like this and I too am a night owl lol.
You worded it so that I could actually see you lying and wondering.Nice one!! |
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Re: Falsifying Dreams
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by shelby on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:03:39 PM AEST
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insomia comes to me often as well I would rather be up at night, this poem is great, a mystery about it.
Michelle |
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Re: Falsifying Dreams
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by Crow on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:53:17 PM AEST
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| i like your writing, this is a little spookie to me. good write, Crow |
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