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Something Wrong
Contributed by
Kane
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Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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People dream of a world at peace,
I dream of blood curling screams and folks dying in their sleep,
( Is there something wrong with me,)
People dream of finding that perfect love,
I dream of driving drunk, and swimming in blood,
( Is there something wrong with me)
People dream of finding that perfect mate,
I dream of taking a life by releaseing my hate,
( Is there something wrong with me,)
People pray they live a full and lovely life,
I don't pray I go in sreach of a sharper knife,
( Is there something wrong with me,)
People cry when someone close to them dies,
I cry when a murder gets an injection, or has to fries,
( Is there something wrong with me,)
People are scared of what they don't understand,
I am that evil in which you can't stand,
( Is there something wrong with me,)
People are scared of death,
I accept it, and look forward to her caress,
( Is there something wrong with me?)
Heart & Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
Kane
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2003-09-14 04:45:00]
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Re: Something Wrong
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 06:30:06 AM AEST
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| Ummm do you want me to really answer that question? Because I think that I would be scared to. |
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Re: Something Wrong
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:23:36 AM AEST
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"People dream of finding that perfect mate,
I dream of taking a life by releaseing my hate,"
Welllll........maybe *shrugs* Sounds like deep depression to me.
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Re: Something Wrong
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:03:43 PM AEST
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Excellent write, Kane..tho I won't attempt to answer it..lol.. I loved the way this was wriiten.
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Jenni |
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Re: Something Wrong
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:26:24 PM AEST
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there's somethig wrong with all of us. The things I think deep inside my mind I never let ne one know. Very good write and disturbingly close to my inner thoughts.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Something Wrong
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:16:15 PM AEST
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| Well people have their own thoughts on everything yours are a little darker than mine would be but thats ok for you,if that works for you! Good dark poem! Christina |
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