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Time Is Precious
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'll go anywhere to be with you
If but for a passing breath
Just everywhere,so free with you
Until time has faced it's death
For every single moment
Is worth nothing less than gold
Why should we sit and worry
How the future should unfold
To be so very near you
Feel your body close to mine
Or share in contagious laughter
Perfect use of valued time
Not as lucky as so many
We do not have forever
But please can't we just be
Happy for a little time together
I want to know the feeling
Of your hand upon my face
To whisper soft against your cheek
As I melt in your embrace
Don't you want to look at me
See how my eyes beam bright
And imagine us spooning together
Drifting off into the night
Every day I'd turn the clock hands
Back to the previous hour
So that for more precious moments
Your skin I'd sensually devour
Let us take whatever time is offered us
Spend some precious moments together
Please say you'll give me a memory
To keep near my heart forever
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-09-14 00:05:00]
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Re: Time Is Precious
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 12:11:08 AM AEST
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very beautiful
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Re: Time Is Precious
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 01:53:19 AM AEST
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| Time Is Precious indeed. A good poem with a good message to the readers. |
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Re: Time Is Precious
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by Crow on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 02:40:03 AM AEST
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| if you have not won this guy`s heart yet, you certainly have here. wonderful write. Crow |
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Re: Time Is Precious
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by Crow on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 02:40:48 AM AEST
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| if you have not won this guy`s heart yet, you certainly have here. wonderful write. Crow |
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Re: Time Is Precious
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by SecretlyMia on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 03:51:28 AM AEST
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Thats a great poem! I wish i could write like that!
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Re: Time Is Precious
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by Pompous on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 07:26:28 AM AEST
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| brillian piece of writing...i agree with all the other comments especially the one that says "i wish I could write like you" |
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Re: Time Is Precious
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by Merry on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:38:21 AM AEST
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Lovely romantic and beautifully done - Bravo
Made me feel very sentimental
merry
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Re: Time Is Precious
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by roisin on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 10:10:43 AM AEST
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gorgeous heartfelt words...enjoy so much reading your penned thoughts....
rosie |
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Re: Time Is Precious
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:18:37 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful feeling this gives off,with every word! Great write! Christina |
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